Drawing comic update

The first assessment I did for drawing class was essentially a draft of my comic proposal. Looking at my comic now I wasn't really going to make many changes but after receiving some feedback I decided to make some changes. These changes were generally around the action in the comic, looking back at the originals some pages I felt were fine however some did require a necessary change as the action felt quite stuff. To try and remedy this I looked at how other manga/comic artists handle action/combat. One of the techniques that is done is the enlargement of the action itself so by placing it overtop the comic panels or by using a whole page to illustrate that its a large scale fight.

(Below are some examples from existing manga that employ this, I've also included the old vs new comic pages in the end I changed 6 and a half pages, including more panels to give the characters more expression and including a page solely focused on the action)

Overall I am happy with the result and think the changes I made were good ones