Page 4- Progress

Page 4 

At the moment I am working on page 4 which mainly focuses on May going over her dream, noting how familiar the girl is, before she can encounter a revelation she is interrupted by her mother screaming her name in concern after hearing her screaming. From page 1 I think I have improved my art greatly, the illustrations look a lot cleaner than the previous and I think if I continue to keep my time management going as well as quality control I could have a pretty good looking comic when I'm finished.